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This is my first submission into the 100 themes challenge-Number 32-Night.

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:iconswsu-master:
The outline seems a little too thick on the moon, but I love the character.

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:iconfragilelildoll:
I see what you mean, and thank you!

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:iconmngamojemo:
Good composition overall, but the coloring could use work. I think the theme would be better suited by some play with the quality of light: if the moon were made a light-source, and the hair darkened. It's a sort of blending I think is easier to accomplish by hand.

You put light in the hair, but it's shining from above. That's the biggest problem I see: the moon is not really saying "moon".

The pensive look of the character is wonderful, though. Her face is just spot-on.

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Thanks for that, I didn't even think about the moon and the shading! I really need to work on coloring.

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:iconshintei-chan:
It looks good!
I like it! ^_^
Keep it up and drop by sometimes!

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:iconfragilelildoll:
thank you, and I will! :)

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:iconphoenixflysagain:
This is really nice. Though the shading could be a bit more dramatic if you added a bit more of a gradient to the background. Other than that. Nice work!

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thank you!

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